Suggestions for successors

I think that Writing studio class is difficult because it uses a lot of English. If you become for successors, you had better listen carefully your teacher saying. It is important to make your blog efficient. Then I think if you don't understand part, you should ask the instractor or teacher at once. And it is good that typing speed is faster. this class use almost the computer. So, typing plactice is very necessary to type English word. And I think that I must get to custom to read or listening or speaking English every day. Then you will like English more. I think that I need to encounter more English. So I have to do same thing. It was chance for your to be good ability English. I cheer for the next syudent. I say do your best this Writing class.

[142 words]

Typing

Typing is a lot of important for me. Because it is useful when we will work another place. I can not be fast typing speed trial. I want to be fast typing speed. I do not often use the personal computer, so I do not type the kye. I like typing, it maybe use the blame. In my house, there is personal computer, so I can practice of typing. There are a lot of test of qualify, for example, word test. It is important for me to find the job in the future. I want to take a lot of qualify. I must study the test or practice typing speed trial.

[111 words]

proto-portfolio

Student ID: 06267
(last five digits of
your student no.)

Writing IVc: Portfolio
(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, and Words

(See: Note 2, below.)

Months	08	09	10	11	12	01	Totals	fn	Indices
Book reviews	0	0	0	5	13	0	18	18/18.2	.2
Blog posts	0	0	3	29	58	3	93	93/90.2	.2
Words	0	0	2285	1663	3331	266	7545	7546/7500.2	.2
TOTAL	---	---	---	---	---	---	---	---

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below[.])

1.1. Showcase	Short titles [+ links]	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	¶	W	C	L	P	M	Notes
Mega- essay 07.10.12	Kumamoto	07.10.10		279	0	0	0	0
Favorite place(-s) 07.10.26	Favorite place	07.10.26		306	0	0	0	0
Movie review 07.11.11	Toy Story	07.11.10		384	5	0	0	0
Community life 07.11.25	Community life	07.11.14		304	2	0	0	0
TV in Japan 07.12.09	Technology of TV	07.12.5		346	0	0	0	0
Learning w/ computers 07.12.21	Learning with computers	07.12.12		752	0	0	0	0
Totals	---	---		2373	7	0	0	0	---

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [My best essay is Learning with computer. I could make sentences well.]
  

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd)	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*	More Christmas Iconography	08.1.14	13
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*	House of Keibo	07.11.14	14
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*	Toy Story	07.11.14	18
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd)	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments*[*]
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*	Comunity life	07.12.5	29
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	07.12.5	---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*	Finaly	07.12.19	13
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	07.1.14	---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	7

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?

• ...I wasn't written comments.
  

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

• [I was glad giving a lot of comments. I want to be useful it. ]
  

3.0. Typing Speed Trials

Showcase	Numbers of words	Dates (yy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial*	53	07.10.10
3.2. Best typing speed trial*	122	07.11.21
3.3. Improvement (best minus worst)	62	---
3.4. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials**	77

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* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.

4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	07.05.16	39	1
2-01	Gradiator	07.11.6	71	0
2-02	LOVE OR MONEY	07.11.6	91	0
2-03	Robin Hood	07.11.27	53	0
2-04	JAWS	07.11.27	56	0
2-05	King Arthur	07.11.30	55	0
2-06	APOLLO 13	07.12.1	65	0
2-07	Men in black	07.12.1	61	0
2-08	Mr. Bean	07.12.2	76	0
2-09	JURASSIK PARK	07.12.2	83	0
2-10	Christmas in Prague	07.12.3	85	0
2-11	Martin ruther king	07.12.4	87	0
2-12	HULK	07.12.4	64	0
2-13	Sherlock Holmes SS	07.12.9	61	0
2-14	Brad PITT	07.12.11	74	0
2-15	The Elephant Man	07.12.13	64	0
2-16	Robinson Crusoe	07.12.19	73	0
2-17	DEAD MAN'S ISLAND	07.12.22	98	0
2-18	The Piano	07.12.30	75	0
---	---	TOTALS:	1292	0

Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [My best review is DEAD MAN'S ISLAND. it is because the story is really interesting. so I remember until now.]

5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive?	yes
5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	yes
5.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?		no
5.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	yes
5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	yes
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	yes
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	yes
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)	yes
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)		no
"movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)	yes
5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	yes
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? ___ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. www (n) xxx (m) yyy (o) zzz (p) ...	---	---
5.3. Links & media	---	---
5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics?		no
Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?		no
How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics? ___ posts including pictures or other graphics	---	---
5.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?		no
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?* ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?		no
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? ___ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here: ... ... ...	---	---

5.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. ...Essays
2. ...Quickposts
3. ...book review
   

6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

• ...I think I wanted to write blog on October and September.
  

7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

• ...Peers should write blog every day.
  

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template amplifies the template for Writing IIIc portfolios.
2. The overview section (0.0. Overview, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-01.
3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02.

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December 31th

Today is the last day in this year. I ate Japanese Soba. I wish next year will best for me. I will go to part time job in Sukiya. I have to work 11 hours. I will go home next morning on January first.

[46 words]

Book review02-18: The PIANO

I read THE PIANO. It is the final book that I read in fall semester. This book is so interesting. I don’t know that story true. But if it is true, this story is surprising. The main character has never learned about the piano.　However, he played difficult song in the piano at once. I knew that he is really loves about the piano. I think that I want to read English books next year.

[75 words]

snow

It is very cold today. A village in the mountains is snow. In the weather, tomorrow will be colder than today.
[21 words]

CUT

I had my hair cut yesterday. I had cut it than I imagined. Berber is near my house. So I have been since I was junior high school student. I have my hair cut once two months. I will cut my hair in February next year.

[46 words]

KAZUNOKO

Yesterday I ate herring roe. It was good taste. But I ate a lot of it, so I felt not so good.
I must careful too much eat.

[28 words]

Crean

I cleaned my room almost perfectly. This room was so messy. It was good that there was space.

Finaly

I bought the Nintendo DS at last. this is so beautiful screan. It is very good. DS means double screen. I can touch it with the pen. It can play a lot of way.

[34 words]

COFFEE

Do you like coffee? I like it very much. It is nice taste with chocolate. Caffeine don’t makes me sleep.

[20 words]

A new year's card

I sent kind people a new year’s card yesterday. I haven’t written it for a long time. Did you write it for anyone?

[23 words]

M-1 Grandpre

I watched M-1 Grandpre yesterday. I really laughed at watching it. M-1 decided a champion that is a two- man comedy act. Champion is sandwich man.

[26 words]

Merry Christmas

Merry Christmas!! I ate a lot of cakes. I went to Saishunkan to see the illumination. It was so beautiful. I want to go there again.

[26 words]