2008年1月30日水曜日

Suggestions for successors

I think that Writing studio class is difficult because it uses a lot of English. If you become for successors, you had better listen carefully your teacher saying. It is important to make your blog efficient. Then I think if you don't understand part, you should ask the instractor or teacher at once. And it is good that typing speed is faster. this class use almost the computer. So, typing plactice is very necessary to type English word. And I think that I must get to custom to read or listening or speaking English every day. Then you will like English more. I think that I need to encounter more English. So I have to do same thing. It was chance for your to be good ability English. I cheer for the next syudent. I say do your best this Writing class.
[142 words]

2008年1月16日水曜日

Typing

Typing is a lot of important for me. Because it is useful when we will work another place. I can not be fast typing speed trial. I want to be fast typing speed. I do not often use the personal computer, so I do not type the kye. I like typing, it maybe use the blame. In my house, there is personal computer, so I can practice of typing. There are a lot of test of qualify, for example, word test. It is important for me to find the job in the future. I want to take a lot of qualify. I must study the test or practice typing speed trial.
[111 words]

2008年1月11日金曜日

proto-portfolio

Student ID: 06267
(last five digits of
your student no.)

Writing IVc: Portfolio
(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, and Words

(See: Note 2, below.)

Months
08
09
10
11
12
01
Totals
fn
Indices
Book reviews 0
0
0
5
13
0
18

18/18.2

.2
Blog posts 0
0
3
29
58
3
93

93/90.2

.2
Words 0
0
2285
1663
3331
266
7545

7546/7500.2

.2
TOTAL
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1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below[.])

1.1. Showcase
Short
titles
[+ links]
Dates
(yy.mm.dd)

W
C
L
P
M
Notes
Mega-
essay
07.10.12
Kumamoto
07.10.10

279
0
0
0
0

Favorite
place(-s)
07.10.26
Favorite place
07.10.26

306
0
0
0
0

Movie
review
07.11.11
Toy Story
07.11.10

384
5
0
0
0

Community
life
07.11.25
Community life
07.11.14

304
2
0
0
0

TV in
Japan
07.12.09
Technology of TV
07.12.5

346
0
0
0
0

Learning w/
computers
07.12.21
Learning with computers
07.12.12

752
0
0
0
0





















Totals---
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2373
7
0
0
0
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Key:
¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
  • [My best essay is Learning with computer. I could make sentences well.]

2.0. Comments

Showcase
Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*

More Christmas Iconography

08.1.14

13

2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*House of Keibo
07.11.14
14

2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*
Toy Story
07.11.14
18

2.4. Most comments on:
Titles of posts with link
Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd) Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments*[*]
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*
Comunity life
07.12.5
29

2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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07.12.5
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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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2.4.2. Any of your other posts*
Finaly

07.12.19

13

2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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07.1.14
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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?---
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7






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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?
  • ...I wasn't written comments.

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

  • [I was glad giving a lot of comments. I want to be useful it. ]

3.0. Typing Speed Trials

Showcase
Numbers of words
Dates (yy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial*
53
07.10.10
3.2. Best typing speed trial*
122
07.11.21
3.3. Improvement (best minus worst)
62
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3.4. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials** 77




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* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.

4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. ShowcaseShort titles
with links
Dates (yy.mm.dd)WordsComments
Example:
Vampire Killer
07.05.16
39
1
2-01
Gradiator
07.11.6
71
0
2-02
LOVE OR MONEY
07.11.6
91
0
2-03
Robin Hood
07.11.27
53
0
2-04
JAWS
07.11.27
56
0
2-05
King Arthur
07.11.30
55
0
2-06
APOLLO 13
07.12.1
65
0
2-07
Men in black
07.12.1
61
0
2-08
Mr. Bean
07.12.2
76
0
2-09
JURASSIK PARK
07.12.2
83
0
2-10
Christmas in Prague
07.12.3
85
0
2-11
Martin ruther king
07.12.4
87
0
2-12
HULK
07.12.4
64
0
2-13
Sherlock Holmes SS
07.12.9
61
0
2-14
Brad PITT
07.12.11
74
0
2-15
The Elephant Man
07.12.13
64
0
2-16
Robinson Crusoe
07.12.19
73
0
2-17
DEAD MAN'S ISLAND
07.12.22
98
0
2-18
The Piano
07.12.30
75
0










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TOTALS:
1292
0
Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
  • [My best review is DEAD MAN'S ISLAND. it is because the story is really interesting. so I remember until now.]

5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media


Showcase
Yes
No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive?
yes

5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? yes

5.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?
no
5.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?

yes

5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?yes

5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):---
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  • "books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)
yes

  • "essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")
yes

  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)
yes

  • "links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)

no
  • "movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)
yes

5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? yes

  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?
    • ___ other labels attached to three or more posts
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  • Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below.
    • www (n)
    • xxx (m)
    • yyy (o)
    • zzz (p)
    • ...
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5.3. Links & media---
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5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics?
no
  • Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?

no
  • How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics?
    • ___ posts including pictures or other graphics
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5.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?
no
  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?*
    • ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)
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5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?
no
  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?
    • ___ posts including other media
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  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here:
    1. ...
    2. ...
    3. ...

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5.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.
  1. ...Essays
  2. ...Quickposts
  3. ...book review

6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

  • ...I think I wanted to write blog on October and September.

7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

  • ...Peers should write blog every day.

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Notes:
  1. This portfolio template amplifies the template for Writing IIIc portfolios.
  2. The overview section (0.0. Overview, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-01.
  3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02.
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2007年12月31日月曜日

December 31th

Today is the last day in this year. I ate Japanese Soba. I wish next year will best for me. I will go to part time job in Sukiya. I have to work 11 hours. I will go home next morning on January first.
[46 words]

2007年12月30日日曜日

Book review02-18: The PIANO

I read THE PIANO. It is the final book that I read in fall semester. This book is so interesting. I don’t know that story true. But if it is true, this story is surprising. The main character has never learned about the piano. However, he played difficult song in the piano at once. I knew that he is really loves about the piano. I think that I want to read English books next year.
[75 words]

snow

It is very cold today. A village in the mountains is snow. In the weather, tomorrow will be colder than today.
[21 words]

CUT

I had my hair cut yesterday. I had cut it than I imagined. Berber is near my house. So I have been since I was junior high school student. I have my hair cut once two months. I will cut my hair in February next year.
[46 words]

2007年12月29日土曜日

KAZUNOKO

Yesterday I ate herring roe. It was good taste. But I ate a lot of it, so I felt not so good.
I must careful too much eat.
[28 words]

Crean

I cleaned my room almost perfectly. This room was so messy. It was good that there was space.

Finaly

I bought the Nintendo DS at last. this is so beautiful screan. It is very good. DS means double screen. I can touch it with the pen. It can play a lot of way.
[34 words]

2007年12月27日木曜日

COFFEE

Do you like coffee? I like it very much. It is nice taste with chocolate. Caffeine don’t makes me sleep.
[20 words]

A new year's card

I sent kind people a new year’s card yesterday. I haven’t written it for a long time. Did you write it for anyone?
[23 words]

2007年12月25日火曜日

M-1 Grandpre

I watched M-1 Grandpre yesterday. I really laughed at watching it. M-1 decided a champion that is a two- man comedy act. Champion is sandwich man.
[26 words]

Merry Christmas

Merry Christmas!! I ate a lot of cakes. I went to Saishunkan to see the illumination. It was so beautiful. I want to go there again.
[26 words]